looks great mate! got a full english feel to it just like unscene (one of the most underrated films ever made)
my only quibble is the music didn't seem to go with it as well as it could, and thats one of the things that made unscene so fantastic. The music was always perfect for the riding on screen.
just my two cents worth... feel free to ignore.
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cheers, constructive criticism is always good. Music choice is probably the hardest thing about a film as you can never please everyone. For example i personally find whiley on the moelfre bit of the new earthed amazing, but some people think its s**t. but I will put in a wide variety of music so it doesnt get repetitive and your guaranteed to like some of it!
i really enjoyed that, great camera work and editing, the music was good too, just didn't like how lo fi it was. look forward to seein the finished product.
Looks good Callum. No point in me telling you what I think is right with it though
Whats wrong is:
The general "sameyness". Most of the rider shoots look like they could have been shot on the same day in the same location.
Lack of any arty stuff. Get some tripod shots, scenery, non-panning shots etc. Personally I don't go in for it too much, but these days people expect films to look like that.
Music sounded like you had recorded it on a mobile phone
als bars are the like wings of a plane! and also nice footage , well edited , great seletion of riders and good music but like supercross sed all the shots are a bit samey and the music quality is shite!
Supercross' point about it looking like its all been shot on a welsh mountain is good, mainly because for the most part its true! Luckily I am leaving England next week for the summer to film in Andorra, spain, france , italy, slovenia and south Africa. So I reckon they should be a bit of Variation! Also using more tripod shots etc; Its difficult on a steep wet welsh mountain but dont worry I am into that s**t when the tracks right. music s**t quality; i couldent find a download so i recorded it whilst playing which is not ideal, but iv ordered a cd.
I think you need to give out jobs to people other than yourself I dont think the level of design / photoshop / typography work adds to the theme of it all at the moment, I would infact say it decreases it somewhat.
I cant comment on the song as I muted it after 20seconds - it really does sound like it was recorded on a mobile in the subway... really though get in touch with your audio because you need to realise the importance - great sound can carry the pace, feel and professional look of the film and poor sound will just distroy you and lose audience intrest at the first hurdle where as the picture can have somewhat a bit more leeway.
Its hard to judge editing on a teaser so as far as I can say is you have a few nice shots, steady hand and composition but like previously mentiond you need to set the scene on location more.
I think with all the rider access youve got and the mass of footage you must have it might be a good idea bringing an editor and music tech on board to solidify your film as its quite easy to get lost in the moment and have a b grade product
hope you dont mind too much what ive said i just dont see anypoint in suger coating stuff thats what friends and family are for.