and i thought we were going to be having a cook along

haha
only things i can see wrong is the start and end, the start it too long on the building and a bit boring, should have lots of little 5second shots or people digging and sweeping ect in lots of diff parts of the track and the end parts were geting too dark, quality wasnt great either but i not shure thats to do with the camera, pinkbike or because of the softwear you used.
but all in all its got potential to be great
