im no expert at this but just an idea, maybe put the bikes features in as it goes along, like travel, and all its good points, like wide axle for extra stability (assuming they have 150rear?) if not make up some good points about 135 spacingetc etc, just helping sell the bike on its features aswell as showing what it can do
yes like someone else said puty the features of the bike in maybe with stills as the info comes up. also quieter music would work i think. as well as get rid of the whole fimed by and produced by lark at the end thats not ad like unless its in your brief? maybe a voice over on the product name, something like Ironhorse for all your MTB needs as to a non MTber the ad could be confusing as extreme sports are used to advertise many things now, as well as info on how to buy one, maybe a phone number email address etc. steve
Pete Simonds........................RISPEC. .....thats a fine vid and well put together, only one thing that suggests it is 'not add like'.....you need a bit of voice over, Blondes with husky voices tend to do the trick (not hulk hogan) ....still a fine effort fair play
Right I know thif is way too late but I reckon strapping a cam to the bike so you can get a steady cam view of the linkage working would have been a help towards makeing it look like the bike is the focal point. Also to you can take the footage into after effects and track points on the linkage very easily so making pointer would have been not too time consuming.... Not an ad, but a really nice vid though all the same chief!!!
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.....thats a fine vid and well put together, only one thing that suggests it is 'not add like'.....you need a bit of voice over, Blondes with husky voices tend to do the trick (not hulk hogan) 
....still a fine effort fair play
