Not too bad, you might wanna cut down some of the clips at the beggining, too many trees! Couldnt really see the rides for the opning 30 seconds. Not bad for a first attempt though. What did you use to edit it?
Could do with some better footage, don't like the feeling i've had to earn watching it by trying to look through the trees and the ladders were getting a bit tedius. Nowt wrong with the actual video but the content needs a bit more variety for my liking. No shortage of good spots around you so would be nice to see a few different places.
yes chris i am fully aware of the lack of content and am greatful of the critisism as soon as i get the working of the software and the nessary footage there will be a much better film on the go.thanks again (genuine not taking the piss) Dan
Yeah I'm sure with more variety you will put together a nice video, as i said there was nothing obviously wrong with any of the production thats gone into that just a bit too much of the same thing for my liking.